Feedback from our rough cut

Already good:

• The paints used are really cool
• Good underwater shot
• Good music
• The actor is very hot 
• Good location

Needs to be improved:

• The underwater shot was too long
• Sometimes the camera is shaky
• Why was he wearing a swimsuit
• Quite rough-still needs things added to it 

Responding to feedback: 

We will cut some parts of the pool shot as we agree that it is too long, but in term of it being slightly shaky, we like this effect as it helps to set the mood of the spy drowning/struggling.

To solve the suit and being half naked situation we have decided to add in a "seductive/killer" scene, where George (the spy) is being seduced..clothes are being taken off.. but in the end turns out the girl is the killer and she shoots him and pushes him into the pool, therefore explaining why he is half naked. 

The shot where we dropped paint into a cup and created cloudy effects had a good response, however it was mention that it did not fit with our "plot". This we knew was going to be mentioned and we understand but we feel that it helps set the 'mysterious' mood to our piece.Perhaps if we adjust the brightness of the clip it will seem to fit in more. The colours each represent different things, the first colour colour that appears is red, representing blood, and the next is dark blue, representing darkness and hidden identity (spy).